Six Sentence Sunday #25

Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment. The feedback I need this week, if you don’t mind: does the metaphor I use work or is it too much of a cliche? Please be sure to visit the other Sixers! Fast forward from last week’s scene on the beach…

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Six Sentence Sunday #24

Welcome back to the beach with Rachel and Adam. This is their first kiss. . . And then he kissed her. It was soft, slow, tentative, despite the implied promise of his words. Rachel immediately felt a soothing warmth travel through her body and she heard her voice murmur yes as Adam grabbed her arms,…

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Six Sentence Sunday #23

Last week was so much fun. Loved reading responses to the six sentences–interesting how words out of context can have a completely different meaning than what’s intended. However, the feedback made me reevaluate Adam’s role in Swashbuckler (my WIP). As a result, I think he’ll be a richer character than I first wrote him. Thank…

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Six Sentence Sunday #22

Thank you for stopping by and for sharing your feedback week after week. Today’s contribution is from Swashbuckler, my WIP. Next week I’ll give some hints as to who Adam is (’cause he certainly isn’t Rodger!). And don’t forget to visit the other talented, creative writers participating this week in Six Sentence Sunday! Six Sunday…

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